Editing Project: Part Deux – Find 10 copyediting errors on mtsusidelines.com

Correction 1

http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/04/softball-jennings-smith-lead-blue-raiders-to-7-2-victory-over-belmont/

The Middle Tennessee Blue Raiders (26-15) traveled to Nashville on Tuesday night to take on the Belmont Bruins (21-12). The Blue Raiders jumped out to an early lead and cruised to a 7-2 victory over the Bruins behind Claire Smith and Cori Jennings’ impressive performance.

The Middle Tennessee Blue Raiders (26-15) traveled to Nashville on Tuesday night to take on the Belmont Bruins (21-12). The Blue Raiders jumped out to an early lead and cruised to a 7-2 victory over the Bruins behind Claire Smith and Cori Jennings’ impressive performance.

Correction 2

http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/04/softball-jennings-smith-lead-blue-raiders-to-7-2-victory-over-belmont/

The Blue Raiders were solid on defense and did not allow a run until the final inning. The Bruins strung together two late runs, but it was too large of a deficit to overcome. Jennings only allowed two hits prior to the final inning and earned her 13th victory on the season.

The Blue Raiders were solid on defense and did not allow a run until the final inning. The Bruins strung together two late runs, but it was too large of a deficit to overcome. Jennings only allowed two hits before the final inning and earned her 13th victory on the season.

Correction 3

http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/04/baseball-solid-offense-lightning-delay-lead-to-victory-for-middle-tennessee/

The Middle Tennessee Blue Raiders hosted the No.15 Vanderbilt Commodores on Tuesday night, in a showdown that pitted two in-state opponents against each other.

The Middle Tennessee Blue Raiders hosted the No.15 Vanderbilt Commodores on Tuesday night, in a showdown that pitted two in-state opponents against each other.

Correction 4

http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/04/softball-jennings-wins-12th-game-in-3-2-victory-over-austin-peay/

The Blue Raiders will be back in action on Wednesday when they host the UT-Martin Skyhawks at 4 p.m.

The Blue Raiders will be back in action on Wednesday when they host the UT-Martin Skyhawks at 4 p.m.

Correction 5

http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/02/opinion-keep-your-prayers-i-want-action/#comments

September 11, 2001: thousands lost their lives at the hands of Islamic extremists.

Sept. 11, 2001: thousands lost their lives at the hands of Islamic extremists.

Correction 6

http://mtsusidelines.com/2018/02/opinion-keep-your-prayers-i-want-action/#comments

The second amendment — written when muskets could fire only three rounds a minute — has been proudly cited by a plethora of lawmakers who find comfort in their complacency of allowing American children to be slaughtered as sacrificial lambs so anyone who wants access to a deadly weapon can have it.

The Second Amendment — written when muskets could fire only three rounds a minute — has been proudly cited by a plethora of lawmakers who find comfort in their complacency of allowing American children to be slaughtered as sacrificial lambs so anyone who wants access to a deadly weapon can have it.

Correction 7

http://mtsusidelines.com/2017/11/looking-back-at-murphy-centers-musical-history/

Prior to the construction of Bridgestone, Murphy Center was the largest venue in Middle Tennessee.

Before the construction of Bridgestone, Murphy Center was the largest venue in Middle Tennessee.

Correction 8

http://mtsusidelines.com/2014/09/south-african-rockers-kongos-take-the-stage-at-mtsu/

KONGOS will return to the Middle Tennessee area next Monday for a show at Nashville’s Marathon Music Works.

KONGOS will return to the Middle Tennessee area next Monday for a show at Nashville’s Marathon Music Works.

This story was written Tuesday, Sept. 9, 2014

Corrections 9-10

http://mtsusidelines.com/2014/09/south-african-rockers-kongos-take-the-stage-at-mtsu/

As expected, the band closed the night with their platinum single “Come With Me Now,” which peaked at number one on the Billboard charts earlier this year.

As expected, the band closed the night with their platinum single “Come With Me Now,” which peaked at No. 1 on the Billboard Alternative Songs chart earlier this year.

The song peaked at No. 38 on the Hot 100 Chart. It only peaked at No. 1 on the Alternative Songs chart.

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